This is my final output of a formative assessment (that becomes a summative) for my Postgraduate Certificate in Learning and Teaching in Higher Education (PGCLTHE). Following my research poster in December, Academic Professional Practice Assessment in November, video tour of a NOW learning room in September, inclusive practice in July, review of 2 research papers (book chapters in my case) in May, teaching observation in April and teaching philosophy in January.
This was originally submitted via a different course document template, but I wrote it out in the format of my previous written work as it presents and reads better this way. I felt like it could have been even more reflective on my actions and challenges with teaching, but as I state, I semi-teach and not that often, so this might not have been as rich on that area. And that was not the primary objective of me undertaking this qualification. RoSE within the text refers to the Record of Supported Evidence I submitted in a table alongside the reflection. This is the final piece after addressing feedback.
I received the following overall feedback (formative).
Strengths
- I appreciate your honest reflection on your own role and responsibilities and how these contribute to student success in your School.
- It is evident that you have engaged in reflective practice throughout your APA/PGCert learning journey, drawing upon ideas from your readings to inform your reflection. This demonstrates a deep level of critical thinking and a desire to continually improve your teaching practice.
- It’s also good to see that you used some of the formative assessments as a piece of evidence.
- Well done on your publication on AI in Mental Health Nursing Practice.
Areas for development
- [Numerous edits to improve my narrative and reflection].
Summative feedback:
- You offer a detailed and personal introduction that helps to foreground the content of your reflections.
- It is evident that you have benefitted from opportunities to reflect on your practice throughout your APA/PGCert learning journey, learning more about yourself as an educator as part of this process. The honesty you share is a real privilege and speaks to the authenticity of your approach.
- A good variety of good quality evidence has been provided.
- Evident that you strive to develop your practice as part of an ongoing process.
- Great that you have incorporated and made links to NTU's policy/ strategy.
- Some good activities identified to share and develop your practice going forward.
- This narrative still lacks a thread to bring the evidence and this submission as a whole together – it currently feels disjointed not allowing for strong, clear evidence of the KSVBs.
- You made great use of the CARR model however, in the sections on scholarship and pedagogical value were a bit brief. You only shared that you wanted to improve your approach and not what was driving it. I would have loved to hear what motivates you in this area of your work and further what you’re going to do next.
- I often struggled to follow the narrative because there were so many elements being discussed. A more of a specific focus on an action/ or linked actions around a specific theme/ activity would have been useful as it would allow for clearer outcomes and evidence of impact.
- The quotations are great evidence of impact however the selection of quotes are so broad that it is unclear what impact you're evidencing. The quotes should be supported by a narrative to provided context and clarity.
- Lesson plan:
- The session plan is a clear indication of what is going to take place in the different environments.
- You offer distinct and active session outcomes that are appropriate to the colleagues and context you work with.
- The main principles have been covered but some of the content would be better in the different sections – please see comments in feedback.
- The reference list indicates a comprehensive engagement with the literature.
- The teaching plan is an accurate representation of what is viewed in the videos.
- Thank you for supplying the additional assets to the session plan – this really helps to understand your strategies and techniques.
- Strengths in all videos:
- Effective use of visual resources to support delivery throughout the video offering.
- In all videos you set the scene and make effective use of session outcomes.
- It’s great to see such a variety of teaching approaches in this submission.
- You’re consistently enthusiastic and honest with colleagues that you work with.
- Video 1:
- It’s great that you contextualise the session and explain how to make best use of the online environment – this is something we see you enact during the video both in terms of pausing to check the chat and inviting colleagues to put their mics on and speak.
- It’s really good to hear you try something new through the interactive poll – it doesn’t appear on screen so it’s even better than you read out the statistics as an inclusive strategy!
- It’s good to hear you remind colleagues that the resources will be shared and therefore the live links will be available demonstrating effective use of teaching technologies.
- Video 2:
- It’s great to see you introduce yourself and from the very beginning of the session invite people to share their insights into your role at NTU.
- It’s good to see you make use of YouTube in your session as a way of contextualising digital literacy, this is great for showcasing sustainability, there are issues with the recording, please see below.
- You field the Q&A really confidently demonstrating your confidence in the space and your knowledge of the content.
- There is a real buzz in the air as colleagues work with the content you have provided – it’s great to see you circulate around the space offering 1:1 support.
- Video 3:
- It’s lovely to see you navigate the workshop by consulting what colleagues want from the session. This dialogic approach is upheld throughout the session and it’s great to see you clarify your understanding so as to best support those on the call.
- You offer praise and encouragement throughout which is a supportive approach for colleagues accessing this training.
- I really laughed when colleagues tried to talk about the disadvantages and you guided them back to the positives!
- What a philosophical question that you’re faced with! You handle this sensitively and quickly refocus the group.
- Reflective video:
- It’s great that you offer scholarship to explain your choice of learning videos – this level of referencing needs to be within your session plans.
- I LOVE that you mention your introverted character and how you’re sensitive to this to be an authentic trainer and teacher.
- It’s great that you mention your mentoring approach to help colleagues, I was particularly impressed with how you navigated significant workload challenges and what you’re intending to do to support colleagues moving forward.
- Lesson plan:
- It’s great that you make use of scholarship, some of your statements are quite sweeping and need to be strengthened through direct, in text citations. There are moments you’re quite glib about some key concepts i.e. Flipped Learning which you clearly know really well as you discuss this in video 3! (CVB4)
- Video:
- For ongoing development:
- You speed through content really quickly and say, “I won’t read this from the screen” on a couple of occasions – I can’t help but wonder if it’s not integral to the session, could you remove it so that you don’t have to rush through it? Why is it there, what does it achieve? Feel free to talk back to this in your reflective video!"
Summative feedback:
- Session Plans
- Overall, your sessions plans have been completed to a high standard. A good level of detail has been included and you provide a clear indication of what is going to take place in the different environments.
- You demonstrate how you are effectively able to adapt your approaches based on the topic and student cohort. Great that you have referred to success for all here also.
- Your session outcomes are clear, concise and appropriate.
- You have done well to support these plans with a breadth of supporting literature.
- The teaching plans are representative of what is viewed in the videos.
- Great that you have clearly outlined that consent has been gained - strengthening the ethical element of this submission. You have also done well to recognise the sustainable element of creating well-structured/ detailed session plans with links to resources.
- Video Recording
- As expected, you make effective use of digital technology throughout these recordings. Great use of interactive poll/ YouTube video.
- You do well to introduce the sessions and make effective use of session outcomes. I particularly like your session 3 and how you spend time to understand what your learner’s expectations of the session are.
- You have done brilliantly to showcase a range of different teaching environments/approaches.
- You actively encourage learner dialogue and promote positive engagement within all your sessions. You also clearly listen to your learners and check your understanding of what is being said, to ensure you can provide the appropriate support. This is great evidence of mentoring/ supervising.
- Overall, you do well to create positive and inclusive learning environments.
- Your responsiveness to learner circumstances/ queries/ questions demonstrates your expertise and knowledge of the topic.
- Great to hear you refer to platforms/resources where learners can access learning materials.
- Reflective video:
- Some excellent reflections made with evidence of impact provided also.
- Great that you have highlighted some ongoing challenges whilst demonstrating a commitment to the development of your practice going forward.
Areas for development
- It would have been useful to have completed the word count section within the session plan to confirm your compliance with the word count requirement.
- The “Who and Why” section could have been enhanced by having a better understanding of who your students are by providing a breakdown of their demographics. It is appreciated however that it is sometimes challenging to access this information, especially given the learners you are working with.
- Although it's great that you mention sustainability – This was also a good opportunity to link to NTU or wider policy/ strategy around this.
- Sometimes you skim past slides, and I wonder if you can avoid doing this by ether highlighting the key information being provided or getting rid of them completely, (depending upon their importance).
- There were some formatting issues with this recording which did impact the quality of video 2.
- Having yourself on the video rather than just providing audio would have made for a more personal reflective piece.

















